Horses
Horses
As a writer and author, I endeavor to keep my fantasy world as grounded in our ‘real’ world as much as is possible. The characters and animals should be as plausible and familiar to the reader as if encountering a similar being on our world. Or Kansas (a tip of the hat to Dorothy’s realization in the Wizard of Oz.).
I’m personally familiar with dogs and cats having owned—or been owned by—these animals since childhood. I know that each species, breed and individual exhibits specific behaviors and personalities. I incorporate this knowledge in each of my novels.
Full disclosure. Horses present a problem for me. Aside from the occasional trail ride, I know nothing about horses beyond a suspicion that these magnificent creatures must be as individual as any other living creature. My problem is compounded that in a medieval setting, horses are and remain the fastest and most reliable form of transportation. The same remains true in my fantasy world, and requires writing about horses and their behavior in a manner that won’t provoke scorn among readers familiar with horses.
After all, I’m already requiring some suspension of belief from my readers so they may immerse themselves in a world of magic. I’d prefer not to push that boundary!
My first step was to define the main breeds that would exist in Valdain, and provide a rough description of each. I mention this in the Dictionary at the end of each novel:
Akhal: plain, brown, metallic colors. Versatile as mounts or pack animals, sure footed.
Avel: hill/plain, furry blue/white. resist enchantment
Bries: hill/plain, orange and rust. Small horns, often used as cavalry mounts
Brindel: desert, cream color with brown stripes. Intelligent
Carmargue: forest/plain, horse colors but favoring grey with thick manes and whip-like tails. A preferred war horse. Empathetic and loyal. Hardy, intelligent and bred for endurance. Broad chest and deep hearts. They are fast, agile and able to traverse marshes or rough terrain.
Grullo: plain, black, dark gray. High endurance
Konik: plain, gray/brown. Tame and resist cold, good pack animals
Marlari: war horse, white with silvery mane and tail, grey. Empathetic and good jumpers
Telbah: jungle, gray white with black stripes. Small scales. Reptilian, berserk with blood, vulnerable to cold, need high rider skill
Next, what about horses? How do they act? What makes them ‘tick’? In answer to this, I’m indebted to Malcolm and Franchesca Forbes for their insight when writing a specific passage, especially in regards to a setting or the events of a novel. They also suggested ‘The Man Who Listens to Horses’ by Monty Roberts as the source to understand horse psychology.
Here’s some of my ‘take-aways’ if you’re curious:
- A rider leads a horse by voice and tone.
- A horse becomes lazy when ridden by a fearful rider.
- Horses sleep standing unless feeling safe. They lean into—not away—from physical pressure.
- Riding horses for hours on end pains the inner thigh and rump until the rider is accustomed to the animal. Backs ache with every equine step. New or poor riders stand in their stirrups.
A horse can tell you a lot of things by the way it moves its body, ears, and eyes. Learn a horse’s language and the horse will learn yours. They understand everything a rider says. Horses have their own language:
- Neigh or scream: rage or terror. Bared teeth
- Whinny: A call for the herd from an isolated horse, or the call of a foal for a mare. Expressing nervousness
- Snort: worry
- Nicker: longing or delight
- Whicker: recognition
- Switching tail: agitation
- Ears back: Angry, ready to kick or buck. Ears always point in the direction of the horse’s interest.
- Supremacy: ears back, nose straight out at shoulder height. Appears to stalk, tip-toe. Arched neck
- Nose to ground: I’m sorry
- Licking and chewing: I’m not a threat
Horses can be dangerous, especially the war horses ridden by the characters in Valdain. All I can say is ‘yipes’!
The following are real actions from aggressive horses:
- The stallion bit his rider’s boot and plucked him from his back before tossing him into the air like a stick.
- The stallion crashed into the pole as if it were a twig, his front hooves striking with deadly accuracy. He bit and tore with his teeth between squeals of rage, then pawed at the prone men sprawled at his feet.
- The horse bucked in rage, squalling and groaning. He’d been known to kill a man when trapped in a stall, as if playing a game of cat and mouse.
When writing about herds, I consider the following: Large groups of horses can be scented at a distance, churn up the earth, and create vibrations that may be felt through the ground.
Finally, a word about travel. Normal travel for a single person on foot is 1 mile per hour or 3 miles per hour on a road.
Army movement: 20 miles per day on road, 30 miles per day on road if a forced march.
10 miles per day using trails or cross country. Cavalry moves 30 miles per day normally. A courier moves 50 miles per day on roads.
I trust this has been generally educational, and perhaps a resource for budding writers. Be sure to check out any of my novels to see how I’ve incorporated horse behavior!






